3) Yes, a programme to electrify all lines is underway (though progress is slow). The Ashes is a famous cricket series between England and Australia. 3) I tried to move the =trophy= up but found that it interrupted the flow of the text; so left it as it is. You might want to get some fair use images to replace the ones that got the chop.
Would like feedback if this article is fully mature for an FA, or could do with some further edits. :) --nixie , (UTC) Had a quick read - it's a nice article - and I have one or two polite suggestions.
I would like fellow wikipedians to review the article and make necessary changes to improve its content.
Inc Man , May 27, 2005 (UTC) Well it's just my opinion, of course, but the article loses its neutral Po V in the first sentence with the word "vicious".
It probably also needs an appropriate warning template at the top. Well, one can say that the article is not neutral as it critices the militants in certain sections.
I can't see how this article, in is present (largely unsourced) state even merits an assessment of "B".
Bulbous (talk) , 11 December 2007 (UTC) Long, well written interesting article with ample references.
Other than that, I noticed a slightly odd formatting tendency with spaces before the commas and periods in some places. However, I have tried my level best in maintaing neutral viepoint from both Indian and Pakistani prospectives on the terrorism.
I have also tried to correct the odd format of the article. There's still some cross verification of facts to be done.
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